I think the writing is a bit too free. Chaska would have written it by hand but a bit more structured, with your writing; also it seems the writing should be a bit thicker.
Anna Jane McIntyre's love of the nighttime spectacle, cheap glamour, the complexity of being human, lights and action has resulted in an obsession with the circus arts. Her work explores animism, social behaviour, movement, the imagined, the agreed upon, notions of balance and the powerful allure of the asymmetrical.
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I think the writing is a bit too free. Chaska would have written it by hand but a bit more structured, with your writing; also it seems the writing should be a bit thicker.
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